Write a 5 point summary for stanzas 8-9. Please write in paragraph form using complete sentences and correct spelling.
Sentence 1: Overall idea
Sentence 2: Detail from the beginning
Sentence 3: Detail from the middle
Sentence 4: Detail from the end
Sentence 5: Your prediction
Sentence 1: Overall idea
Sentence 2: Detail from the beginning
Sentence 3: Detail from the middle
Sentence 4: Detail from the end
Sentence 5: Your prediction
66 comments:
Theres a bird in the bedroom. The bird made the man happy. The crest was shorn and shaven. He asked the bird for his name and the bird replied Nevermore is my name. I think the bird is going to stay with him.
There is a bird above his chamber door. The man saw the bird wandering. He asked the bird his name. The bird replied Nevermore. I think that hes going to let the bird stay there.
The man was talking to the Raven, that was on the bust on top of the chamber door. The man was sad but then he started to smile. He asked what was the bird's name and the bird said, "Nevermore." The man thought the bird was evil. I think that his dead wife is giving him signs.
The man was talking to a bird. Looking at the bird made the man happy. The man was startled by the bird. The bird was asked his name. I perdict the bird called the wifes name.
The overall idea is the raven talking.A nice handsome bird flew in.He asked the birds name. The bird said his name was nevermore and he was amazed by what the bird said, and laughung.I think the bird is a like ghost.
That he was talking to the bird. Well first the man asked the bird what his name was and the bird said nevermore. Then he was kinda laughting about the whole deal. After that he was kinda like well that he didn't just say that. I predict that bird well keep talking to the man.
The overall idea is the man was talking to the bird. The crest was shaven. He was talking to the bird. The bired replied his name as nevermore. I preidct that the bird is going to come back to him more.
The overall idea of these stanza's is the man was shocked because he asked the bird his name and the bird answered him. I think the bird is going to start a conversation with him. I like this poem so fare becasue it's sounds good!
The guy is saying that the bird was talking and he could under stand him.The bird ask him his name and the bird gave him an answer. I think that the bird is going rto ask him many questions and he will answer them and i ask why is he asking so many questions.
The overall idea of what happend was that the raven was talking to the man. The first thing that happend was that a nioce bird flew right into the room. Teh second thing that happend was that the bird was asked the mans name. The third and final thing was that the bird replied back. I predict that the bird will fly away and will never come back.
The bird in the mans bedroom speaks.The bird changed the mans feelings. The bird was nice and neat. The man asked the bird its name and it replied "nevermore". The bird I think is just mimicing the words which the man had said before.
The raven is in in house and is sitting over the bedroom. The raven is echoing everything that he is saying. The man askes the raven what his name is. The bird says that it is nevermore. I predict that they willbe good friends.
This raven comes flyin into the room.The bird made the man very delited.The bird was all feathers and shaven.The man asked the bird what its name is, it replied nevermore.I predict that the man is going to die cause that's what happens Before people die.
The whole idea of the stanzas was the bird coming in and perching on the top of the camber door.In the begining the bird changed the mans frown upside down.In the middle the man asked the bird what its name is and the bird answered "nevermore."In the end the man was surpised to hear the bird talk.I think that the bird will attack the man.
The idea is that poe is haering a tapping at has window. Hr opens it and in comes a raven through his door. He ask the raven it's name and is crazy over the bird. not done!!!!!!!!!
He was talking to the bird. At first the man asked the bird what his name was and the bird said nevermore. Then he was laughing about the whole deal. After that he was wierd that the bird was talking. I predict that bird will keep talking to the man.
Theres a bird in my room. And there was like knocking on the door. He asked teh bird what his name was. The bird anwsered nevermore. I think the bird is going to stay with him.
he is scared. He statrts to smile. Asked the bird a quistion.The ravenrplied.I predict the next part that lenore will come in the room.
A raven flew into his window and landed on his bust. The raven made the man really confused. The man asked the raven his name and it answered NEVERMORE. The man was starting to the get scared and thought the bird was evil. I predict the bird is going to tell the man something about his dead wife.
The man was talking to the Raven, that was on the bust on top of the chamber door. The man was sad but then he started to smile. He asked what was the bird's name and the bird said, "Nevermore." The man thought the bird was evil. I think that his dead wife is giving him signs.
The idea is that poe is haering a tapping at has window.He opens it and in comes a raven through his door. He ask the raven it's name and is crazy over the bird. The bird said nevermore and that's the name of the raven. I predict that poe is going to eat the bird for a late snack.
He was talking to the bird that was by the door. In the beginning the man was asking the bird quations. In the middle the bird said nevermore. At the end the man was thinking about that the bird may be evil and not nice. I think that the bird is going to show him things about his life.
the man asked the bird his name and it answered.the bird answered nevermore.the man was marvelled.then the man was confused.i predict that the man is going to die.
The black bird flew into his bedroom window.The man asked what the birds name was and the bird said nevermore.Then the man figured out something bad happened.I predict that the bird is going to take the man somewhere.
The raven sat above the guys chamber door. The raven sat with his chest puffed at looking sternly at the man. the man laughed a few seconds then went back to his gloomy mood. the man asked the bird's name note expecting a reply. The raven said nevermore. The sat and lingered at the bird. I think nevermore will diliver news to him.
Scores:
10 points possible
2nd hour:
1. 10 - good work!
2. 6 - form; spelling; caps; write in complete sentences
3. 10 - good
4. 10 - good
5. 9 - spelling
6. 8 - #2 nc; spelling
7. 9 - spelling
8. 8 - caps, spelling
9. 9 - #2 nc
3rd hour
1. 8 - Poe is not the character; spelling
2. 9 - spelling
3. 9 - spelling
4. 7 - #2,3 nc; spelling
5. 10 - okay
6. 9 - spelling
7. not posted
8. 8 - spelling; grammar
9. 10 - good job!
5th hour:
1. 7 - #1 nc; spelling; grammar
2. 6 - #3,4 nc; spelling; caps
3. 10 - good work
4. 6 - caps; spelling; need more details
5. 6 - #1 nc; write in complete sentences; caps; spelling
6. 9 - one missing sentence
7. 8 - caps; spelling
8. 8 - #3 nc; spelling
9. 8 - caps; need more detail
the idea was the bird said its name. though the cest is shorn and shaven. art shure no craven.he was suprised to hear the bird talk. i predict the bird is a messanger.
The guy is saying that the bird was talking and he could under stand him.The bird ask him his name and the bird gave him an answer. I think that the bird is going rto ask him many questions and he will answer them and i ask why is he asking so many questions.
The overall idea is the raven talking. A nice handsome bird flew in. He asked the birds name. The bird said his name was nevermore and he was amazed by what the bird said, and laughed. I think the bird is a ghost trying to talk to him about Lenore.
In stanzas eight through nine this bird flies in his guys room. Then the guy asks the bird what his name is. An the bird responses by nevermore. Then the guy thinks it is weird that the birds name is nevermore.
The man was talking to the Raven, that was on the bust on top of the chamber door. The man was sad but then he started to smile. He asked what was the bird's name and the bird said, "Nevermore." The man thought the bird was evil. I think that his dead wife is giving him signs.
There is a bird in his room. The bird made him fell alright. The shorn was criped. i think the bird is lenore.
There is a bird in his room. The bird made him fell alright. The shorn was criped. i think the bird is lenore.
Theres a raven in his bedroom. The bird made the man go from sad to happy. The crest was shorn and shaven. He questioned the bird for his name and the bird replied Nevermore. The bird is going to stay there with him for awhile.
Theres a raven in his bedroom. The bird made the man go from sad to happy. The crest was shorn and shaven. He questioned the bird for his name and the bird replied Nevermore. The bird is going to stay there with him for awhile.
Theres a raven in his bedroom. The bird made the man go from sad to happy. The crest was shorn and shaven. He questioned the bird for his name and the bird replied Nevermore. The bird is going to stay there with him for awhile.
There is a bird in this man's bedroom on the window pain thing. The man asks what the birds name is and the bird answers 'Nevermore'.
The man is marvelled that the bird can talk. The man sits in front of the bird with the bust and asks him a question. I predict that the bird will say different things if the man asks some different question. And i also predict that the master of the raven is the devil.
The overall is that he is felling very corious about the bird. The man asks the bird what is name is. When the bird answers the bird says that is name is nevermore. The name nevermore is not a very common name for a bird to have. I predict that the bird will tell the men that that is not his real name.
The overall idea is that he is felling very corious about the ravenin his room. The man asks the bird what is name is. When the bird answers the bird says that his name is nevermore. The name nevermore is not a very common name for anyone to have. I predict that the bird will tell the man that it is not his real name.
Theres a bird in the bedroom. The bird made the man happy. The crest was shorn and shaven. He asked the bird for his name and the bird replied Nevermore is my name. I think the bird is going to
There's a bird n the man's bedroom at it wont leave. The raven made the man feel sad because it reminded him of Lenore. The man got scared because he asked the bird what it's anem was and it said it's name was nevermore. I predict that the bird start to say some different words.
The overall idea is that he asked the bird what his name was and he said never more
not done
The man is astonished by this gloom sight and is mind scrambled.Then he he told the bird of his past abandonses then the bird replied nevermore.The bird might just be an illusion like a huge symbol.
The overall idea of these stanza's is that he is going wacko.the beginning detail of the stanza is that the bird is tricking the man into smiling.The middle detail is the bird telling the man that his name is nevermore and that the man is confused.The end detail is that the man is realizing how blest he is that the bird chose his house.
The man is astonished by this gloom sight and is mind scrambled.Then he told the bird of his past abandonment then the bird replied nevermore.The bird might just be an illusion like a huge symbol.
That he was talking to the bird. First the man asked the bird what his name was and the bird said nevermore. Then he was kind of laughting about the whole deal. After that he was kind of like well that he didn't just say that. I predict that bird well keep talking to the man.
Points: 9 possible
1. 8 complete sentence, grammar
2.
3. 0 copied
4. 7 paragraph form, caps
5.
6.
7. 9
8. 8 #5
9. 9
10. 8 caps
11. 5 spelling, #3,#4 incorrect, caps
12. 7 #3,#4 incorrect
13.
14. 9
15. 8 spelling
16. 8 spelling
17. 7 spelling, caps
18.
19. 0 copied
20. 8 spelling
Theres a bird in the bedroom. The bird made the man happy. The crest was shorn and shaven. He asked the bird for his name and the bird replied Nevermore is my name. I think the bird is going to stay with him.
The overall idea is that he asked the bird what his name was and he said "nevermore." He opened the door and a raven entered the room,he sat there wondering what in the heck is the bird doing in my house. Then he pulls up a chair and asks the bird what his name was and he said "nevermore."
The man is astonished and awestruck that there is a bird sitting on a bust in his bedroom.the man does not know whether to shoo it or let it stay.he's thinking what is going on am i being haunted by a very large bird or is this just part of my trip.He asks the bird its name and the bird says nevermore.i think this guy is on a bad opium trip
The man is astonished and awestruck that there is a bird sitting on a bust in his bedroom.the man does not know whether to shoo it or let it stay.he's thinking what is going on am i being haunted by a very large bird or is this just part of my trip.He asks the bird its name and the bird says nevermore.i think this guy is on a bad opium trip
The man is astonished and awestruck that there is a bird sitting on a bust in his bedroom.the man does not know whether to shoo it or let it stay.he's thinking what is going on am i being haunted by a very large bird or is this just part of my trip.He asks the bird its name and the bird says nevermore.i think this guy is on a bad opium trip
The man is astonished and awestruck that there is a bird sitting on a bust in his bedroom.the man does not know whether to shoo it or let it stay.he's thinking what is going on am i being haunted by a very large bird or is this just part of my trip.He asks the bird its name and the bird says nevermore.i think this guy is on a bad opium trip
Theres a bird in the bedroom. The bird made the man happy. The crest was shorn and shaven. He asked the bird for his name and the bird replied Nevermore is my name. I think the bird is going to stay with him.
there is a bird in the the bedroom. the bird made the man happy. the crest was shorn and shaven. he asked the bird for his name and the bird replied nevermore is is my name. i think the bird is going to stay with him
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